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White Mountain

A mountain of clouds, Building from one another; White lava erupts.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 10:16:00 AM

Great description on the clouds, sometimes I look at them and think what you write about, it's amazing how you bring to page.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:27:00 AM

Nice scene, clouds are fun to watch. I like looking for shapes in them................Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:41:00 AM

Amazing imagery.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:28:00 PM

White Lava, nicely said. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 10:55:00 PM

This is incredible, to watch clouds build up to high does look like the eruption of white lava. Your artistic eye is always open, nice work. Tyler

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 3:29:00 PM

I love the imagery of white lava, great job.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2009 10:12:00 PM

Dear Raul, "White Lava" so very interesting I saw a volcano erupt if YOU could have seen the way that little puffy cloud scurred across the sky and over the mountain Superb Write LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS Please read my POEM "If I Could"...HG

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/19/2009 6:30:00 PM

excellent, let's the reader become involved! nice! Jim

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/19/2009 3:27:00 PM

Excellent choice of words creating imagery which lets our imagination soar. Wonderful! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/19/2009 3:00:00 PM

Wow..white lava? very nice ...strong image.

Date: 3/19/2009 1:27:00 PM

The vivid imagery works well to convey your thoughts in this concise poem. Enjoyed it. Keep on writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/19/2009 1:21:00 PM

Reminds me of the sky we have today....white lava!! Nice image! ~ Carrie