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White Mountain

A mountain of clouds,
Building from one another;
White lava erupts.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:16 AM

Great description on the clouds, sometimes I look at them and think what you write about, it's amazing how you bring to page.

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:27 AM

Nice scene, clouds are fun to watch. I like looking for shapes in them................Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 1:41 AM

Amazing imagery.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:28 PM

White Lava, nicely said. Love E.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 10:55 PM

This is incredible, to watch clouds build up to high does look like the eruption of white lava. Your artistic eye is always open, nice work. Tyler

Abe Lopez

March 23, 2009 at 3:29 PM

I love the imagery of white lava, great job.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 19, 2009 at 10:12 PM

Dear Raul, "White Lava" so very interesting I saw a volcano erupt if YOU could have seen the way that little puffy cloud scurred across the sky and over the mountain Superb Write LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS Please read my POEM "If I Could"...HG