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White Light

WHITE LIGHT daylight coming in intrusive caught sight of the minimal  after-images hanging in the air time  become  often a beginning  unstretched  uneven  or discarded curls  in  layered texture a consistent touch  of traces of actions a come together a residue of the unfinished thoughts petered out dwindled to an excerpt & a sigh a faltered   interruption barely begun delectable yet truncated&  improvised  suddenness  a feeling of arrival a reassembled happening a boundary   overrun  &unfocused throughout NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 9/20/2022 5:35:00 AM
This white light Brian is cleverly written and shown in your words. Enjoyed reading...
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