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White Lies - 23 Dec 2013

naked trees on ice -
silently the night has sown
a field of white lies

Copyright © Michael Dom | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2013 at 12:58 AM

my gosh, this is awesome!! some say that the traditional syllable count and use of symbolism for haiku is not a good thing to have, but I sure do LOVE this one.

December 28, 2013 at 7:28 AM

Sometimes traditions are good, especially when its a learning curve. Thanks for your high praise Andrea.

December 27, 2013 at 11:57 PM

Amazing, great write!

December 28, 2013 at 7:25 AM

Thanks for your visit Arthur. Vaso - I had a school mate by that name.

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