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White Lace Memories

The lady waited in this place With heart of pure intention Remembering another face Too long ago to mention Lingering on this point in time She danced with him once more For all the memories sublime That's what she came here for They'd held each other oh so close Until the night grew pale He'd given her a single rose She'd lifted up her veil In memory she makes sure of Not slipping down too far What's the point ,for pure love Has put you where you are And so she thinks about that girl Who beamed like a sunray When her darling took her for a whirl Back on her wedding day * for "Point" contest sponsored by Paula Swanson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 5:51:00 PM
Beautiful one, Deb. Glad I finally saw this one .Congratulations are in order too I see! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:07:00 AM
Congrats Deb on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations, beautiful:))
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:16:00 PM
this is so nice,I hope it fares well in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:57:00 PM
Very nice Deb~Congrats to you~Rick
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:03:00 PM
good to see your placment , Deb in the contest today.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:16:00 PM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry my friend... u sure made the point luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congrats, Deb on your well deserved win. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:27:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Deb. Love, Carol
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