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White Lace Memories

The lady waited in this place
With heart of pure intention
Remembering another face
Too long ago to mention

Lingering on this point in time
She danced with him once more
For all the memories sublime
That's what she came here for

They'd held each other oh so close
Until the night grew pale
He'd given her a single rose
She'd lifted up her veil

In memory she makes sure of 
Not slipping down too far
What's the point ,for pure love
Has put you where you are

And so she thinks about that girl
Who beamed like a sunray
When her darling took her for a whirl
Back on her wedding day




* for "Point" contest
sponsored by Paula Swanson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 5:51:00 PM
Beautiful one, Deb. Glad I finally saw this one .Congratulations are in order too I see! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:07:00 AM
Congrats Deb on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations, beautiful:))
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:16:00 PM
this is so nice,I hope it fares well in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:03:00 PM
good to see your placment , Deb in the contest today.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:16:00 PM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry my friend... u sure made the point luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congrats, Deb on your well deserved win. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:27:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Deb. Love, Carol
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