White Lace

A veil of white lace obscures my bride's face as she walks with girlish grace in her practiced pace, look-see; soon, she’ll take her place standing pure and chase by me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Hello Emile, So romantic Emile. I feel the passion in this poem. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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December 10, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Hello Emile, You are very welcome. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene./
Pinet Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Bowring Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 3:11 PM
Beautifully romantic Emile so well penned. This is a new form to me and very interesting. You have done it justice with your skilfully, crafted words. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thanks, Christina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Achara Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Beautiful!
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thanks, Chetta, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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