White Lace

A veil of white lace obscures my bride's face as she walks with girlish grace in her practiced pace, look-see; soon, she’ll take her place standing pure and chase by me.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/9/2024 4:09:00 PM

Hello Emile, So romantic Emile. I feel the passion in this poem. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2024 10:11:00 AM

Hello Emile, You are very welcome. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene./

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/10/2024 7:13:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/22/2024 3:11:00 PM

Beautifully romantic Emile so well penned. This is a new form to me and very interesting. You have done it justice with your skilfully, crafted words. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2024 7:23:00 AM

Thanks, Christina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Chetta Achara

Date: 1/22/2024 1:31:00 PM

Beautiful!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2024 7:23:00 AM

Thanks, Chetta, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.