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Virelai
A French form with alternating rhymes and line lengths.
Each stanza is in three sections, the first two having the same rhyme scheme
and the last having the rhyme scheme of the refrain.   
9 lines with a rhyming scheme of  aab  aab  aab.
Line one, two, four, five, seven and eight have 5 syllables.
Line three, six and nine have 2 syllables.

 

                

A veil of white lace obscures my bride's face as she walks with girlish grace in her practiced pace, look-see; soon, she’ll take her place standing pure and chase by me.

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Date: 1/22/2024 3:11:00 PM
Beautifully romantic Emile so well penned. This is a new form to me and very interesting. You have done it justice with your skilfully, crafted words. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2024 7:23:00 AM
Thanks, Christina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2024 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2024 7:23:00 AM
Thanks, Chetta, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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