White Ice

the pin-up white ice
slow turning into water
the dragonfly wings


* Inspired by both: Mike Duffy's haiku and that beautiful dragonfly & Gayle Sweeper poem.
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Makama Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:43 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Thank you Sir :) You are so welcome. Have a good day.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 6:38 PM
I enjoyed this one, Abdullah. It is nice how you get inspired by others!
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 3:26 AM
That's makes happy :) Yes it is dear lovely Andrea.
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 1:12 PM
- A great haiku, Abdullah - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 3:29 AM
Likewise lovely Anne-Lise! :) Best regards, respect, and wishes.
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