Ann Gilmour Poet Haiku

White Horses

  
waves that ebb and flow
white horses galloping past
soul 'tis calm at last
  
Written 3rd August 2021

Contest Haiku Challenge
Sponsor  Regina McIntosh
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Contest A Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 line
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Brian Strand September 5, 2021 at 12:07 AM Loved the rhyme Ann,it often works well in hiku Ann Gilmour September 7, 2021 at 12:15 AM Oh thank you Brian, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sara Kendrick August 12, 2021 at 8:20 AM Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Must be one of the islands that have those herds of wild horses. I would think that would be a calming experience. Sara Ann Gilmour August 12, 2021 at 9:55 AM Thank you so much Sara. I love the sea whether it be calm or rough and I am so lucky to live so close that I see her and walk by her each day... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier August 12, 2021 at 8:15 AM Beautiful, Ann ~ congrats on your top win Ann Gilmour August 12, 2021 at 9:52 AM Thank you dear Line I really appreciate your lovely words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2021 at 11:11 AM wow, I really like this. Congrats, Ann Ann Gilmour August 7, 2021 at 12:00 PM Thank you so much Andrea, thrilled that you like it... With kindest thoughts Ann x

Kim Rodrigues August 7, 2021 at 9:15 AM Beautiful image! Congrats! Ann Gilmour August 7, 2021 at 9:24 AM Bless you Kim and thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman August 7, 2021 at 8:50 AM So picturesque dear Ann - waves like white horses running on the shoreline! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of calm and serenity to you! Ann Gilmour August 7, 2021 at 9:24 AM Your beautiful words always lift me dearest Sam ~ thank you so much. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex August 7, 2021 at 6:40 AM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win! Ann Gilmour August 7, 2021 at 9:23 AM Dear Christuraj thank you so much my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2021 at 11:37 AM Love your "white horses" write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................. Ann Gilmour August 7, 2021 at 9:22 AM Many thanks dear Paula for your kind comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison August 3, 2021 at 7:46 AM gorgeous haiku Ann:-) hugs Jan xx Ann Gilmour August 3, 2021 at 7:54 AM Thank you Jan ~ I walk by the sea daily and it calms and inspires and fills me with joy... With hugs Ann xx