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White Horses

waves that ebb and flow white horses galloping past soul 'tis calm at last
Written 3rd August 2021 Contest Haiku Challenge Sponsor Regina McIntosh N/A Contest A Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 line Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 9/5/2021 12:07:00 AM
Loved the rhyme Ann,it often works well in hiku
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/7/2021 12:15:00 AM
Oh thank you Brian, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/12/2021 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Must be one of the islands that have those herds of wild horses. I would think that would be a calming experience. Sara
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/12/2021 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara. I love the sea whether it be calm or rough and I am so lucky to live so close that I see her and walk by her each day... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/12/2021 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful, Ann ~ congrats on your top win
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/12/2021 9:52:00 AM
Thank you dear Line I really appreciate your lovely words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/7/2021 11:11:00 AM
wow, I really like this. Congrats, Ann
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/7/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, thrilled that you like it... With kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 8/7/2021 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful image! Congrats!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/7/2021 9:24:00 AM
Bless you Kim and thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/7/2021 8:50:00 AM
So picturesque dear Ann - waves like white horses running on the shoreline! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of calm and serenity to you!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/7/2021 9:24:00 AM
Your beautiful words always lift me dearest Sam ~ thank you so much. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/7/2021 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/7/2021 9:23:00 AM
Dear Christuraj thank you so much my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/6/2021 11:37:00 AM
Love your "white horses" write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/7/2021 9:22:00 AM
Many thanks dear Paula for your kind comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/3/2021 7:46:00 AM
gorgeous haiku Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Jan ~ I walk by the sea daily and it calms and inspires and fills me with joy... With hugs Ann xx

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