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White Gardens

Wafting flakes of snow, Cover the landscape abroad: Winter wonderland.

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Marty Owens

Date: 1/7/2010 9:24:00 AM

Very beautiful Raul...Marty

Date: 1/6/2010 1:26:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration. We've gotten already close to 30 inches of snow here in North Dakota this season. I'm not sure if we're still thinking wonderland. I like your view better however. Another wonderful haiku from you. Thank you for sharing your talent. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2010 11:03:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Raul. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/5/2010 4:21:00 AM

Hóla Raúl, qué bonito es éste Haiku. Te deseo un muy feliz Ano Nuevo!!! We got a winter wonderland here now and I do liove snow and sunshine. And at least it is not too cold. Thank you for your hearty comments....Gert

David Byrne

Date: 1/4/2010 11:17:00 PM

Nice write, but cant help thinking about the song.........smile!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/4/2010 5:55:00 PM

great job, we might get some snow they say?? I don't know it is sure cold.