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                                           Pampas Grass' tassles
                                       Shooting upward fresh new
                                           Beauty filled short life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/4/2010 6:19:00 AM
WOW, I have really got into Haiku lately... This is a such a beauiful image you have put in my mind this morning... Thank you so much for taking time out to read my work and sharing such wonderful comments.. xoox Michael
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:07:00 PM
a lot said in few words, excellent Haiku enjoed. Harry
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:19:00 PM
I like the idea of pampas grass. That is novel thinking. Thank you for your kind remarks and as always, regards from Gerard.
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Date: 9/2/2010 11:51:00 AM
I can visualize it now Sara through your lovely words... was so very happy to read the blog about your son...good news... glory to God... my Eric E is also improving every day ... agreeing in prayer is the way to go my friend... with luv.. have a safe and happy holiday weekend...
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Date: 9/2/2010 11:21:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Sara. Great write. Thanks for your kind words. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph P.S. We are going on a cruise on 27 Nov. It's our 9th cruise. We go every year around the same time, late Nov or early Dec.
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:12:00 AM
Sara, love the images in your haiku, hope you are having a great day, love Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:30:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Sara. Thank you for your kind comments. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:10:00 PM
Very nice. I like this title that goes with it too.LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:23:00 PM
A wonderful haiku with apt images, Sara. enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:03:00 PM
enjoyed reading mom!!
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:02:00 PM
I do love it when they first flower, Sara, and this is a great haiku. Beware the pampas grass, my friend, it's razor sharp, almost impossible to stop from growing and spreading and bees make nests inside. Hope you had a great visit with Tommy, Jr. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:06:00 PM
I have a sprig of pampas grass planted by my driveway , Sara. It is quite beautiful redivivus in your Haiku. Thanks for your comments, they are very important to me. Agape, Moses
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