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White Butterflies and Mums

life 
new forms 
flower seeds 
pressed inside earth 
peppered with color 
they blossom in full view 

fragrant tender petals 
bending in the wind 
white butterflies 
dance upon 
the mums 
life  

August 17, 2021

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Pratap Roy

September 14, 2021 at 11:51 PM

Cngratulations....... Beautifully written, Rose. Liked the flow. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

September 4, 2021 at 8:45 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on this win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Paul Callus

September 1, 2021 at 12:30 AM

Mother Nature has well inspired you, Vienna. I can sense the miracle of life which evolves from seed of love. Congratulations on your fine win, my friend. Regards /x/ paul

Carol Mitra

August 31, 2021 at 7:41 PM

So beautiful as I love how you have compared white butterflies to mums.... Congrats on your win Mystic Rose Rose....All the love :)

Susan Ashley

August 31, 2021 at 6:59 PM

Dear Rose, your appreciation of the beauty of Nature is as lovely as the "tender petals bending in the wind" and "white butterflies" - simply splendid! Your golden pen shines as brightly as your radiant heart. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Malabika Ray Choudhury

August 31, 2021 at 4:27 PM

Congratulations,Rose, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala

Caren Krutsinger

August 20, 2021 at 1:20 AM

Lively and luxurious; a lovely read.

Harry Horsman

August 18, 2021 at 10:01 PM

Love the new born and living aspect, of your poetry. The theme of enhanced with each word.

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2021 at 1:41 PM

A beautiful write and picture. I have never seen white butterflies. I do love butterflies. Bet they are pretty. Have a blessed day......................

Victor Buhagiar

August 18, 2021 at 1:40 AM

White butterflies are lovely. So are chrysanthemums. Hugs.

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 17, 2021 at 10:44 PM

I have just been considering how this year I have not seen one butterfly and no ladybirds... Another warning from nature? Love the gentle tone of this poem...Delice