White Angel

Written: January 17, 2024 _______________________________________ love me my shade winged angel wrap me with your wings bear me to hide in your white shroud save me from the evil imps in the fierce inferno jocular melodies fascinate me and elate me into a lengthy journey 1st place contest winner

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 5:10:00 AM

Dear sotto, i love the softness of your words in this, and how it flows in such a soul stirring manner, i especially loved how you’ve written “ wrap me with your wings bear me to hide in your white shroud save me from the evil imps in the fierce inferno” felt the longing and emotions throughout those lines and the ending too is impeccable! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Thank you for sharing this

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/21/2024 1:52:00 PM

Your poem is the source of a magnificent image. Your words have painted a vision of wonder and beauty. Splendid dear SP.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2024 7:40:00 AM

- What a beautiful poem, Las ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2024 12:07:00 AM

Wonderful!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/18/2024 6:56:00 AM

A heartfelt plea to the angel. Skillfully delivered, my friend. You rock in every form.

Deb M

Date: 1/18/2024 1:28:00 AM

Lasaad….this beautiful write gave me a sense of peace and feeling safe! Lovely my friend! Debx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/17/2024 11:09:00 PM

You have a way with words my friend. This one takes flight. A pleasure to read.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/17/2024 2:01:00 PM

I guess everyone needs an angel. Thank you for this lovely read.

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2024 11:11:00 AM

An excellent arrangement of words and a personal message in your poem asking for a higher power to shield and protect you from harm and evil that may lead you astray... An excellent use of form for the contest.. Best of luck..

Jay Narain

Date: 1/17/2024 10:53:00 AM

Nice Fibonacci theme poem. Content is beautiful.