White Angel

Written: January 17, 2024
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love
me
my shade
winged angel
wrap me with your wings
bear me to hide in your white shroud
save me from the evil imps in the fierce inferno
jocular melodies fascinate me and elate me into a lengthy journey

1st place contest winner

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Ink Empress

January 27, 2024 at 5:10 AM

Dear sotto, i love the softness of your words in this, and how it flows in such a soul stirring manner, i especially loved how you’ve written “ wrap me with your wings bear me to hide in your white shroud save me from the evil imps in the fierce inferno” felt the longing and emotions throughout those lines and the ending too is impeccable! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Thank you for sharing this

Speaks Volumes

January 21, 2024 at 1:52 PM

Your poem is the source of a magnificent image. Your words have painted a vision of wonder and beauty. Splendid dear SP.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 19, 2024 at 7:40 AM

- What a beautiful poem, Las ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

January 19, 2024 at 12:07 AM

Wonderful!

Vijay Pandit

January 18, 2024 at 6:56 AM

A heartfelt plea to the angel. Skillfully delivered, my friend. You rock in every form.

Deb M

January 18, 2024 at 1:28 AM

Lasaad….this beautiful write gave me a sense of peace and feeling safe! Lovely my friend! Debx

Richard Lamoureux

January 17, 2024 at 11:09 PM

You have a way with words my friend. This one takes flight. A pleasure to read.

Hilda Greenhough

January 17, 2024 at 2:01 PM

I guess everyone needs an angel. Thank you for this lovely read.

Silent One

January 17, 2024 at 11:11 AM

An excellent arrangement of words and a personal message in your poem asking for a higher power to shield and protect you from harm and evil that may lead you astray... An excellent use of form for the contest.. Best of luck..