Whisps of Spring

The Maple's leaves have turned amber
Paired Doves whirr in flight
Tiny green tips the Pecan Trees
Great puffed clouds in sight

The Catbird dives for pool's water
Bumblebees buzz with might
Seeking some sweet nectar rare
As my spirit soars to heights  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Komala Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 2:53 AM
so sweet and fabulous written.. i like this piece so much :) thank you dearest friend Sara for sharing <3 wishing you a very best weekend <3 Sk
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 3:34 PM
a beautifully depicted scene, sara!
Loving Iii Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 3:22 PM
in between the strong storms.
Tacito Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:53 AM
My goodness! You defined the core of Spring fully here. I want to play hooky from work now and go play outside! Thanks so much for this! :)
Jones Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:02 PM
A spring beauty Sara....
Sivey Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 8:30 PM
This is awesome, a totally grandiose write my friend! You have written a glorious and harmonious poem! I loved reading this nature inspired piece this evening! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!
Onclaud Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:40 AM
just had to let you know i came by after a long leave from soup.. lovely art-piece, sara.. did one on spring just now.. how are you?... missed you and your poetry...:) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:13 AM
A beautiful and well written poem Sara, thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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April 15, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Good morning Sara, a love whisps of spring in action. Maple leaves, I love the amber color.... As a matter of fact my hair is Amber-Red at the moment... but, no where does the color pair in flight with the lovely imagery in your poem. I am thinking your love for nature is GRAND... a high soar Mrs. Sara... I'm a big fan of your poetry.... always~ Linda
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