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Whispers the Feather

WTF burning bright with pondering ink.
Graceful swans or blackbirds skedaddling
across the vast and empty space. The think
kerplunking into cavernous link.
The quill flying…descriptives diving
onto the writer’s canvas…surviving.

WTF, loud and clear, dear John…
the calligraphic rend of relationship…
The salutation is a haunting paragon.
Parisian-perfumed paper is withdrawn.
The ebony of the crow’s feather, fitting.
His abdominals are eternally splitting.

WTF, wet with mascara tears. Joy
at the indoctrination of its mirth,
bearing personalities of a girl and boy.
To induce was another cousin’s ploy -
joining in on the birth experience fun,
flexing his muscles, nearly triplets spun.

WTF, wading in pools of grace, prayerful rest
of folded hands - serenity glides over vellum.
The ink, so gentle, melodic, transfigured, blessed.
Saint’s swan lyrics  - God’s glory expressed.
Whisper of angels, feathers like baby’s-breath.
Resurrected quill in pall of Christ’s death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Most excellent choices of words used my good friend. All stanza's great but the first and the last stanza are so superbly inked! A fav-a jewel. God bless.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 8:17 PM
I so appreciate your input! God bless you, Robert!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Stupendous poem Kim. Loved how you start each stanza with the same letter. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thank you, dear friend! xx
Poet Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 7:58 PM
Wonderful poem Kim, Blessings my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Blessings to you, dear friend! Thank you!
Buehler Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 7:39 PM
This is exquisite, Kim. It's in my faves.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn! :)
Romios Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 12:18 PM
What a gorgeous poem Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 5:49 PM
I appreciate! Thank you, Pangie! ~ Kim
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