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Whispers On Your Skin Sometimes in my mind I go where never have I been. Slipping quietly into your room like whispers on your skin. I watch as you lay sleeping I join you in your dreams. Sailing over mountains skipping across streams. Counting stars up in the skies that we can almost touch. How can something never known still be missed so much? That's the way it feels to me and this place I've never been. Somehow I know from deep inside I'm returning once again. Like pictures in a magazine of a far and distant shore. A place you never heard of yet you've been there before. So many things for me unseen I long to see again. Slipping quietly in your room like whispers on your skin. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 5/9/2015 2:29:00 PM
This is by far a 7 +3! I love it! Absolutely beautiful! By the way, has anyone ever told you that you have the name of a famous poet? Seriously! Is that I stage name? Lol! I need one! Thanks for sharing. Adding to the favorites! God bless!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/10/2015 9:02:00 AM
Nope :) No one has ever told me that before LOL. It unfortunate that most people who get famous for poetry do so after they are gone lol. Still I thank you for that and for your encouraging words. God Bless
Date: 5/9/2015 11:43:00 AM
Well, as bad as I HATE to admit it...it is my opinion that you have surpassed VeeBdosa and that in itself I thought an impossibility..... take care....
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/9/2015 12:14:00 PM
OOPS ....again ....If I said it wasn't so I would be lying and I don't lie. .....
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/9/2015 12:13:00 PM
If I said it isn't so , I would b
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/9/2015 11:59:00 AM
LOL Say it isn't so! :) It was never a matter of competition. Just a seed that's fed by the sunshine in your smile!! Thank you dear Judy.

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