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Whispers On the Wind

Honesty’s idle breeze gently blows whispers into my blemished heart, tarnished by metaphors that hovered above cloud-covered skies in search of clarity upon zephyrs of truth. Malicious chatter stirs ill-conceived winds that rage internally as sorrowful tempests squall within my mind until honesty’s idle breeze whispers gently again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 4:51:00 PM
enjoyed the many associations with wind! very original! jim
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Date: 8/8/2009 10:34:00 AM
That was beautiful ^_^ I really loved it,and thankyou so much for the comment :D
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Date: 8/8/2009 7:11:00 AM
Beautifully written piece. Keep writing. Sara
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