Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

Whispers of Your Soul

At the finical phase of my life while alone or in crowd
I feel I’m attending a class about the fair and the fraud
It’s not easy to judge what’s it’s like to be bad or good
But there’s a thin line between the two to conclude.

To save or help a man, one doesn’t need to be a savior
To do some evil thing, one doesn’t need to be a sinner.
It’s all about the way you think, how you feel to help
But some call it naivety to cover for their dark yelps.

Think not about whether the person deserves amiss
Helping a person in need has nothing to do who he is
Never measure the benefits to get return but this only
That it’s a unique trait that’s not given to all wholly.

Well, Listen well and hear the whispers of your soul
And just keep your quietude to keep you whole.
Sometimes may come in dreams as an answer to prayers
Or when you’re alone, you may feel them somewhere.

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December 19, 2014
Form: Rhyme
First Place Win

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Black Matta February 24, 2015 at 3:42 PM "Helping a person in need has nothing to do who he is" I like this line, very nice poem//Blackmatta

Tonytocaa Camacho February 23, 2015 at 3:03 PM What a beautiful inspiring write,very deep and meaningful Dr Mehta..thanks you tonytocaa

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:58 PM awesome win..>PD

Eve Roper January 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM Congratulation,Dr. Ram Mehta, on your winning poem, a lot of wisdom in your words. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve

Earl Schumacker January 9, 2015 at 12:30 PM Hi Dr. Mehta, Congratulations on your well deserved win. It was an enjoyable read. Have a great day. Earl

Kayod5 Kayode January 9, 2015 at 10:58 AM Congrats for a Job well done Dr...huggs

Jan Allison January 9, 2015 at 10:55 AM Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne January 9, 2015 at 10:30 AM An incredible write congratulations on your first place win!

Sandra Haight January 9, 2015 at 10:21 AM Congratulations on your 1st Place win, Dr. Ram. Again, your poem is so full of wisdom conveyed by words from the soul. Sandra

Paul Schneiter December 27, 2014 at 7:34 AM Your poem speaks to truth, and it does so with poetic eloquence. Nicely, nicely done.

Kelly Deschler December 24, 2014 at 1:36 AM These words of wisdom are deep, soulful and thought-provoking... A great piece of writing, Dr. Ram. Good luck in Gail's contest!

Arlene Smith December 21, 2014 at 4:01 PM A beautiful philosophy, and great advice... Belt of luck my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Sandip Goswami December 21, 2014 at 2:07 PM Great experience sir. I respect it. best to you.

Lara Wash December 20, 2014 at 10:54 PM Hi Dr. Ram Mehta, I enjoyed your poem because one doesn't have to be a saint or a sinner to do right or wrong, but one must be conscious of their decisions /choices and make wise ones. And then again, sometimes instinct just kicks in and that's when we arrive at "Sometimes" Very good poem. Thanks for sharing it.

Dorian Petersen Potter December 20, 2014 at 12:56 AM You've drawn a very nice pen Dr. Ram! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. Wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a great weekend! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Jan Allison December 19, 2014 at 6:57 PM thought provoking write Dr Mehta:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Rob Carmack December 19, 2014 at 2:28 PM Glad I checked this one out. Good luck in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 19, 2014 at 7:08 AM Probing into the soul is always difficult as there is no limit to where you might end up for such is the depth of it! Your poem, dear Dr. Ram, has got the necessary depth to invite but not to scare the uninitiated! An excellent writing that challenges the mind!