Whispers of Your Soul

At the finical phase of my life while alone or in crowd I feel I’m attending a class about the fair and the fraud It’s not easy to judge what’s it’s like to be bad or good But there’s a thin line between the two to conclude. To save or help a man, one doesn’t need to be a savior To do some evil thing, one doesn’t need to be a sinner. It’s all about the way you think, how you feel to help But some call it naivety to cover for their dark yelps. Think not about whether the person deserves amiss Helping a person in need has nothing to do who he is Never measure the benefits to get return but this only That it’s a unique trait that’s not given to all wholly. Well, Listen well and hear the whispers of your soul And just keep your quietude to keep you whole. Sometimes may come in dreams as an answer to prayers Or when you’re alone, you may feel them somewhere.
+++ December 19, 2014 Form: Rhyme First Place Win

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Date: 2/24/2015 3:42:00 PM
"Helping a person in need has nothing to do who he is" I like this line, very nice poem//Blackmatta
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Date: 2/23/2015 3:03:00 PM
What a beautiful inspiring write,very deep and meaningful Dr Mehta..thanks you tonytocaa
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:58:00 PM
awesome win..>PD
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Date: 1/9/2015 2:57:00 PM
Congratulation,Dr. Ram Mehta, on your winning poem, a lot of wisdom in your words. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:30:00 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Congratulations on your well deserved win. It was an enjoyable read. Have a great day. Earl
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:58:00 AM
Congrats for a Job well done Dr...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:55:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:30:00 AM
An incredible write congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win, Dr. Ram. Again, your poem is so full of wisdom conveyed by words from the soul. Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:34:00 AM
Your poem speaks to truth, and it does so with poetic eloquence. Nicely, nicely done.
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Date: 12/24/2014 1:36:00 AM
These words of wisdom are deep, soulful and thought-provoking... A great piece of writing, Dr. Ram. Good luck in Gail's contest!
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Date: 12/21/2014 4:01:00 PM
A beautiful philosophy, and great advice... Belt of luck my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 12/21/2014 2:07:00 PM
Great experience sir. I respect it. best to you.
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Date: 12/20/2014 10:54:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram Mehta, I enjoyed your poem because one doesn't have to be a saint or a sinner to do right or wrong, but one must be conscious of their decisions /choices and make wise ones. And then again, sometimes instinct just kicks in and that's when we arrive at "Sometimes" Very good poem. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/20/2014 12:56:00 AM
You've drawn a very nice pen Dr. Ram! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. Wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a great weekend! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/19/2014 6:57:00 PM
thought provoking write Dr Mehta:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/19/2014 2:28:00 PM
Glad I checked this one out. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/19/2014 7:08:00 AM
Probing into the soul is always difficult as there is no limit to where you might end up for such is the depth of it! Your poem, dear Dr. Ram, has got the necessary depth to invite but not to scare the uninitiated! An excellent writing that challenges the mind!
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