Whispers of Paradise

Paved with amber leaves, the trail unfolds, 
A canvas brushed with hues of gold. 
Rivers murmur secrets in soft refrain, 
Adventures awaited, no hint of pain. 
Dancing shadows in the mellow light, 
In this realm of dreams, everything feels right. 
Sighs of contentment, the heart's gentle tease, 
Echoes of laughter on the warm autumn breeze.
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Greenhough Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 6:02 PM
A fantastic poem. It rolls along like a leisurely walk. I felt the beauty and comfort of the scene.
Cunningham Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 12:19 AM
Beautiful acrostic Alesia, hope your week is going well. Tom
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October 14, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Paradise - that's what this acrostic poem is. "A canvas brushed with hues of gold." What a stunning image. Well done on a beautiful post.
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October 14, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Lovely acrostic dear poet..
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