Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Whispers of Melodies

Written: August 20, 2023
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vintage whispers sing,
painting tapestries anew,
lost in rhythmic bliss

fairy tale romance,
gentleman and lady dance,
love's immobile trance.

transported in time,
earthly worries fade away,
peace in melodies.

dapper waltz they share,
fairy tale romance unfurls,
enchanting their hearts.

Earthly time stands still,
In the silence they have sought,
Love's spell renders them.

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Hiya Sharma August 21, 2023 at 11:00 PM This definitely painted a whimsical wonderland on my heart's canvas and I'm awestruck by the elegant imageries that you've hued in a mesmerizing way! I truly am in admiration of your gorgeous and impeccable word choices.. "Transported in time, earthly worries fade away, peace in melodies" So wonderful.. "Fairytale romance unfurls", " Love's spell renders them" Wow, spellbinding...

Vijay Pandit August 21, 2023 at 6:25 AM How charming and delightful a write my friend. Much enjoyed the romantic tenor of your poem, Lasaad. Keep rocking!

Mulu Magdalinos August 21, 2023 at 1:04 AM Dear Sotto.excellent work ,always creative! Have a blessed day!

Michael Tor August 20, 2023 at 9:30 PM Lasaad you take Haikus' to another level. Another favorite my friend stimulating appeal for me. Love this...

Speaks Volumes August 20, 2023 at 7:19 PM Dear poet, as long as I can read your poetry, I will never run out of praise filled words.

Speaks Volumes August 20, 2023 at 7:17 PM A set of Haiku's building to a magnificent dance of love. So vibrant yet tender. A romance told with so few words, and so much emotion. A delight.

The Situation August 20, 2023 at 2:27 PM When you think about it, besides touching there's this. The dance the music. I call it flirtation.

Robert Lindley August 20, 2023 at 1:22 PM My good friend, these are excellent haiku. I have myself never done a romantic haiku. I may try to do one now. Wonderful verses. God bless.

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2023 at 1:19 PM Ahh!!! Romantic lines penned. Creative work to match the picture. I appreciate the visits to my page. Sara