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Written: August 20, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ vintage whispers sing, painting tapestries anew, lost in rhythmic bliss fairy tale romance, gentleman and lady dance, love's immobile trance. transported in time, earthly worries fade away, peace in melodies. dapper waltz they share, fairy tale romance unfurls, enchanting their hearts. Earthly time stands still, In the silence they have sought, Love's spell renders them.

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Date: 8/21/2023 11:00:00 PM
This definitely painted a whimsical wonderland on my heart's canvas and I'm awestruck by the elegant imageries that you've hued in a mesmerizing way! I truly am in admiration of your gorgeous and impeccable word choices.. "Transported in time, earthly worries fade away, peace in melodies" So wonderful.. "Fairytale romance unfurls", " Love's spell renders them" Wow, spellbinding...
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Date: 8/21/2023 6:25:00 AM
How charming and delightful a write my friend. Much enjoyed the romantic tenor of your poem, Lasaad. Keep rocking!
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Date: 8/21/2023 1:04:00 AM
Dear Sotto.excellent work ,always creative! Have a blessed day!
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Date: 8/20/2023 9:30:00 PM
Lasaad you take Haikus' to another level. Another favorite my friend stimulating appeal for me. Love this...
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Date: 8/20/2023 7:19:00 PM
Dear poet, as long as I can read your poetry, I will never run out of praise filled words.
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Date: 8/20/2023 7:17:00 PM
A set of Haiku's building to a magnificent dance of love. So vibrant yet tender. A romance told with so few words, and so much emotion. A delight.
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Date: 8/20/2023 2:27:00 PM
When you think about it, besides touching there's this. The dance the music. I call it flirtation.
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Date: 8/20/2023 1:22:00 PM
My good friend, these are excellent haiku. I have myself never done a romantic haiku. I may try to do one now. Wonderful verses. God bless.
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Date: 8/20/2023 1:19:00 PM
Ahh!!! Romantic lines penned. Creative work to match the picture. I appreciate the visits to my page. Sara
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