Whispers of Love

Once saw you freshly bathed, with glowing soft skin
Remember your hair with the stars and moons therein.
Your piercing grey-blue eyes making my heart sway 
The greenest of things blue, the bluest of things grey.

You fuller pouty lower lip alluring to my upper lip
I don’t need to get tips, as beautiful lips sink ship
I remember your look, making me quite nervous
Those eyes leaning, increasing my heart’s pulses

Come in my garden, roses want to see you blossoming
The recesses of my heart needs to feel throbbing
Come, my mind wishes to feel intellectual touch
Come in my dreams, I wish to confront reality as such.

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April 8,2014
Form: Rhyme
Dr. Ram Mehta
Ninth Place Win
Contest: Whispers of Love by Gail Angel Doyle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Very romantic. Congrats Dr. Ram on this fine win. // paul
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 4:02 AM
- Congratulations on your well deserved 9th place, Dr. Ram - Have a lovely day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on this fine win
Parker Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Dr Ram
Haick Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM
A gem, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on a fine win! Annalise
Nance Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:45 AM
Very beautiful poem :)
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April 9, 2014 at 3:26 AM
a fabulous write, XOX~ Linda
Richards Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 11:51 AM
you have whispered a thing of beauty!! :)
Carrillo Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 7:08 AM
What a beautiful poem DR. Ram. shows true feelings, perfect for the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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