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Whispers of Dusk

The breeze tiptoes across the sleeping field, whispering to the folded blooms, dreams drift along the dusk.

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/11/2025 2:59:00 PM

Gorgeous. Love the image this creates -

Alesia Leach
Date: 5/11/2025 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paige! I’m so glad the imagery spoke to you--Whispers of Dusk was all about capturing that quiet, haunting beauty. Your comment made my day!

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/28/2025 6:28:00 PM

Enchanting sensuality, coupled with a sweet intent. You bring Nature into new and jovial life in this poem of youthful charm, I love it! "The breeze tiptoes across the sleeping field..." This is a great feeling that the Earth smiles for Alesia...I.A.B.

Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:49:00 AM

Thank you, Justin--your words made me smile like the Earth in spring. I'm so glad you felt the charm and playfulness I hoped to weave into this piece. Your feedback always lifts the veil on something deeper, and I’m truly grateful for that. With warmth and joy, Alesia