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Whispers of Air

Travelling through the roads Vibing with my song Releasing emotional loads Thinking nothing was ever wrong Observing lives in different abodes May this ride be forever long As it makes me full with epodes If not forever then a bit prolong The air feels something different As if it wants to tell me about something But fails to sound efficient I can still understand you rumbling About the lives I see travelling along It feels a different ubiquity Mixed on the path of distinct belong I see them but not the deep identity.

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Date: 12/23/2023 9:49:00 AM
You poetically capture the multifaceted experience of a journey—both external and internal. The use of music, observation, and reflection creates a rich narrative that invites readers to appreciate the diversity of human lives while acknowledging the inherent mystery within each individual's journey...
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Date: 12/23/2023 9:13:00 AM
Places and faces, passing by without depth and texture. Part of the mundanity of life
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