Whispers of Air

Travelling through the roads
Vibing with my song
Releasing emotional loads
Thinking nothing was ever wrong

Observing lives in different abodes
May this ride be forever long
As it makes me full with epodes
If not forever then a bit prolong

The air feels something different
As if it wants to tell me about something
But fails to sound efficient
I can still understand you rumbling

About the lives I see travelling along
It feels a different ubiquity
Mixed on the path of distinct belong
I see them but not the deep identity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 23, 2023 at 9:49 AM
You poetically capture the multifaceted experience of a journey—both external and internal. The use of music, observation, and reflection creates a rich narrative that invites readers to appreciate the diversity of human lives while acknowledging the inherent mystery within each individual's journey...
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