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Whispers In the Night

You and me and the man in the moon standing all alone under a starry sky. Midnight whispers a tempting lover’s tune as the nightingale sings his lullaby. Standing face to face I gaze into your eyes as the full moon shines on the lake so bright. Somewhere in the distance a lone wolf cries; I whisper in your ear you look lovely tonight. The scent of the pine trees lingers in the air as I hold your body in a warm embrace; I run my fingers through your silky hair; the whispers of the breeze caress your face. The night stands still as our hearts eclipse while standing under the post oak bough. I feel your body tremble as I kiss your lips; I hear you softly whisper I need you now. November 15, 2017

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Date: 9/5/2021 3:33:00 PM
Your poems are like melted chocolate John, sweet, silky and tasteful and a strong desire to wanting more. Love your poems. Hugs, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/6/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thank you for such a sweet and creamy comment, Emilia, I don’t think anyone has ever compared my poetry to melted chocolate before. Big hugs, John
Date: 1/6/2018 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this piece. Very beautiful and romantic write.
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/7/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Rhoda, another romantic poem. I could write these all day. :)
Date: 11/29/2017 4:28:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write John, a fav.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/29/2017 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis, glad you enjoyed, and thanks for taking the time to read my poetry.
Date: 11/25/2017 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on this romantic sensual masterpiece John. Very deserving of a win....Maria
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/27/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Maria, glad you enjoyed my sensual little poem.
Date: 11/23/2017 2:33:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, John - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/23/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory, and thanks for reading my poetry.
Date: 11/21/2017 5:47:00 PM
what a beautiful tender romantic poem John:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/21/2017 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, as always your comments are appreciated.
Date: 11/20/2017 10:09:00 AM
Hi John, This is my first time seeing this beautiful and romantic write. I see that it was for a contest and you won. Congratulations on a well derserved win:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/20/2017 10:44:00 AM
Good morning, Alexis! Thank you for your wonderful comments; I always appreciate your thoughts my friend. John
Date: 11/20/2017 12:06:00 AM
Congrats to you, John. A very well deserved win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/20/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 11/19/2017 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on a beautifully sensual poem, John. Congrats on your win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/19/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 11/16/2017 10:49:00 AM
What a passion and love filled poem. Enjoyed reading this and the lovers story that unfolds is so well written. Thanks for writing such a great piece!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/16/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Kristina! I'm glad you liked it so well. I really had to did deep and use a lot of imagination for this one...it's been a while...haha John
Date: 11/15/2017 8:44:00 PM
Ohh John, so romantic with loving sentiments so very well expressed. Beautiful imagery that tease the senses. Excellent and enjoyed so much!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/16/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, I'm glad you enjoyed. Your wonderful comments are always appreciated and welcome. John
Date: 11/15/2017 3:19:00 PM
ooh la la. VERY romantic for the contest, John. Best of luck.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/15/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, your comments are always appreciated. John
Date: 11/15/2017 1:26:00 PM
Breathless beautiful pen John, I expect this to place well :) My best to you! xomo
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/15/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Maureen. My best to you as well. John
Date: 11/15/2017 8:45:00 AM
Very nice John! Each line is a magnet!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/15/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words, Chuck, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John

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