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Whispers in the Breeze

I hear soft whispers in the breeze that try to tease my fantasies, and in my mind love to appease, my soul to please, my heart at ease. My thoughts they wander far away where sunlight’s ray and moonbeams play; beyond the clouds in sky’s array, a young girl stays to light my day. I feel that we have met before, perhaps outdoor on distant shore while standing by the ocean drawer; these thoughts implore my heart to soar. The whispers say she feels my heart, these thoughts impart right from the start a feeling like some abstract art that from my heart will ne’er depart. These lovely thoughts my heart does please; my reveries these moments seize, and so there drifting through the trees, in gentle breeze, these whispers tease.
March 13, 2019

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Date: 3/22/2019 6:27:00 AM
Gee John. What a well penned poem, almost like Shakespeare. Thank you, Panagiota
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/22/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota, I appreciate your kind thoughts and I am humbled by the comparison. John
Date: 3/21/2019 1:33:00 PM
Hi John, A refreshing write full of hope carried in the breeze with a romantic flare about it! Nicely penned John, Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/21/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer, I appreciate your wonderful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 3/14/2019 7:07:00 AM
Lol didnt think you was here but hey been wrong before! Of course lovely write my friend! Hugs Bren
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/14/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Bren, I've been quite busy lately and haven't had much time for anything other than work. But I have to squeeze a poem out once in a while to keep my brain from freezing up. All my best. John
Date: 3/13/2019 11:15:00 PM
Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. The wind carries many moments my dear friend. Capture each one, as you can. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/14/2019 3:47:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. John