John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

Whispers In the Breeze

I hear soft whispers in the breeze
that try to tease my fantasies,
and in my mind love to appease,
my soul to please, my heart at ease.

My thoughts they wander far away
where sunlight’s ray and moonbeams play;
beyond the clouds in sky’s array,
a woman stays to light my day.

I feel that we have met before,
perhaps outdoor on distant shore
while standing by the ocean drawer;
these thoughts implore my heart to soar.

Her whispers say she feels my heart,
these thoughts impart right from the start
a feeling like some abstract art
that from my heart will ne’er depart.

These lovely thoughts my heart does please;
my reveries these moments seize,
and so there drifting through the trees,
in gentle breeze, these whispers tease.


March 13, 2019

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Sheri Evans March 17, 2020 at 8:14 PM John, After reading several of your beautiful poems I see how alike our styles are. I am very impressed with your talents as your flow is right up my alley. We also have some of the same types of ideas as this reminds of my And, Angels Came. I also saw the drawing sketched by Elizabeth, (wife, daughter?) either way very impressive drawing. Talented family I see. Thankyou for sharing. John Gondolf March 19, 2020 at 6:55 AM Thank you so much, Sheri. I have read several of your poems and enjoyed the very much, I will read more as I get a chance. This picture was drawn by my daughter about 8 years ago when she was 16, unfortunately she has stopped drawing. John

Brandy Nicole June 22, 2019 at 8:27 PM Your thoughts touch the sky. Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy John Gondolf June 22, 2019 at 9:13 PM Thank you so much, B, my thoughts drift in the clouds. All my best to you. John

L. J. Carber June 22, 2019 at 9:40 AM Nicely done John--congrats on yr 1st place win. John Gondolf June 22, 2019 at 11:16 AM Thank you, L.J., I appreciate it. John

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2019 at 3:43 PM Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! John Gondolf April 12, 2019 at 5:36 PM Thanks for stopping by, Richard, I appreciate it. John

Panagiota Romios March 22, 2019 at 6:27 AM Gee John. What a well penned poem, almost like Shakespeare. Thank you, Panagiota John Gondolf March 22, 2019 at 8:23 AM Thank you, Panagiota, I appreciate your kind thoughts and I am humbled by the comparison. John

Jennifer Proxenos March 21, 2019 at 1:33 PM Hi John, A refreshing write full of hope carried in the breeze with a romantic flare about it! Nicely penned John, Poetry Hugs, Jennifer. John Gondolf March 21, 2019 at 5:30 PM Thank you, Jennifer, I appreciate your wonderful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole March 13, 2019 at 11:15 PM Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. The wind carries many moments my dear friend. Capture each one, as you can. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy John Gondolf March 14, 2019 at 3:47 AM Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. John