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image was inspiration for this poem--for online poetry contest

poem submitted to "!473" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, May 15, 2026

WHISPERS

light
stirs
softly,
gathers grace,
soft as first morning,
a hush that widens through the heart,
reminding me that God begins His work in whispers
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Brul Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 6:17 PM
Very heartwarming! Congratulations dear Sara. ^__^ JCB
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 5:26 AM
thank you! color me grateful.
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 7:01 AM
Great technical skill in terms of structure, rhythm, and form. Beautifully crafted
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 5:27 AM
thank you for noticing my efforts. Your words mean a great deal to me.
Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 6:45 AM
so delicate and beautiful ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 5:27 AM
wow! thank you.
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