Whispering Wind

He looked long 
through the light pink sky
whispering in the wind
where did you go
gone not a trace
his heart in a race
lost without her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 29, 2012 at 8:36 PM
DAWN, DEEP... AND THE LONGING WILLL ALWAYS GO ON..THANK YOU 4 SHARING, ALWAYS~PD
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:13 AM
Thank You D.p ...was written for a friend..he is longing. Not me.x
Rhinem Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Smile ˜ Definitely Lost * Great Poe Dawn ˜ Love, John!:) ˜
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:13 AM
Thank you John...x
Brown Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Dawn. Wish you the best always in your writing always. Love, Carol
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:13 AM
Thank you Carol xx
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