Debjani Mitra Poet Rhyme

Whispering Trees

Into wild grass of the green woods
       my teddy bear wanted to go
Away from cuddle of sofas and pillows 
    a  real forest he wanted to know.

Let's climb this tree full of big leaves
     branches swaying, in mild soft breeze 
Wish we both had feathers and wings,
      to reach top... of the whispering trees. 




9th May 2019
Theme pic #1 child with teddy bear climbing tree
Eve Roper's Free verse or Rhyme contest 8 lines
Placed first in winning list

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Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2019 at 6:02 AM So cute, Debjani! Many poets picked the child’s perspective and you picked the bear’s. Congrats! Debjani Mitra May 13, 2019 at 7:17 AM Thanks Kim, you always have a unique way to praise. Learned a lot from ur poems too

Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2019 at 1:49 PM - Congratulations on your win, Debjani :) - // Anne-Lise :) Debjani Mitra May 13, 2019 at 7:18 AM Thanks a lot for your time to read and appreciate

Susan Ashley May 9, 2019 at 9:47 PM I love the whimsical spirit of your beautiful poem, Debjani. I remember imagining what it would be like to be able to fly as a child and your lovely poem brought those feelings back to me. Captivating poetry. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan