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Whispering To Myself

Perhaps with stars in your joyful eyes my friend You will recall the time like rainbow as you would Hold your baby in your thrilled arms to blend Your joy with the moon as gloriously it stood In your mind’s sky close to the trees of sandalwood As you did your best to shape out a diamond Moody edges would curve and run and flee Your flames at times would get dampened Still you would love on your toes and knee The child swinging in her rosy growth spree Unconditional love you tried to provide her She grew like a lovely bubbling brook Stormy clouds though made you anxious for answer You felt depressed as clouds would sit on her gray look Counted when a breeze would come and the branches shook The key lies in the heredity and environment Within your means you do your best to light the lamp Tempest and quake you had to confront Sometimes stars and sometimes gloom in your camp Will she be a scientist or will walk a ramp On a critical day you find the ship is built To your wonder and joy the ship has sailed You don't know if it sails smooth or it will tilt You now spend your void days mostly veiled Photos of parenting in what you have inhaled and exhaled October 17, 2017
For Parenthood - Poetry Contest Hosted by Silent One

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Date: 10/28/2017 10:31:00 PM
Wonderful write,Probir, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve ...
Date: 10/25/2017 8:14:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/27/2017 6:02:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/23/2017 6:24:00 AM
Congrats Probir, for your placement in the contest, with this inimitable piece! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for liking ...
Date: 10/21/2017 6:04:00 PM
Beautifully written with lovely sentiments and metaphors, Probir. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra ...
Date: 10/21/2017 8:40:00 AM
Returning to offer you my congratulations Probir on your high placement in the contest with your poetically beautiful write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Susan ...
Date: 10/21/2017 12:58:00 AM
Hi Probir, I enjoyed the way you composed this, so metaphorically. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis ...
Date: 10/20/2017 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, a great composition.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/20/2017 4:34:00 PM
Great use of metaphor, this poem reads very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/20/2017 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 10/19/2017 8:27:00 PM
Always, such beautiful expression and imagery I can expect when I read your poems Probir. This poem meets my expectations and is so wondrously poetic. It's such a joy to read and linger over... Your last line especially, is a dazzling delight!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/20/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thank you, Susan ... Your comment I value highly ...
Date: 10/18/2017 7:31:00 PM
Very evocative, perceptive poetry, Probir. Great lines throughout ... you now spend your void days mostly veiled. Photos of parenting in what you have inhaled and exhaled. Golden glowing write. Your ruminations are always worth the time to read, then ponder. Love and joy always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/20/2017 11:28:00 PM
Thank you , Freddie ...
Date: 10/17/2017 11:17:00 AM
Lovely whispers--best for a win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/18/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation ...

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