Whisper of Near

I lean on the edge
But don’t know what to do
I shed a tear
And think of you

The air is cold 
Still at its best 
You make my heart 
Beat in my chest

I sit here still
Quiet as I be
Come on love 
Just think of me

A whisper I hear
Out far away
One more time
To hear what you say

I hear I love you
As a tear hits the floor
Quick and steady 
He walks through the door

I lay still as he 
Walks through the room
Hold on honey
I’ll be home soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 16, 2009 at 12:43 AM
Excellent writing my friend...Raul
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