Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Whisper Goodbye -

In its winter of gray steel ice

                                           gloom and doom

                                        A scream from an owl

                                            keeps me cold

                                         and shaking with fear

                                    Mysterious silver moonlight

                                         A voice no one hears

                                        with a desperate desire

                                     Sounds like an infant groan

                                    The silence falls, winter white

                                        the forgotten prospect

                                    I fly away with downy wings









07.01.2019
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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Robertina B. February 4, 2019 at 6:45 AM Wow!!! A beautiful write, Sunshine.. Mystical and exquiste, my friend.. The pic. Is beautiful as well.. A fav for me!! Have a blessed day.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2019 at 1:30 PM - Robertina, many thanks for the great comment a fave and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 14, 2019 at 10:43 AM A beautiful wintry write. Have a lovely day today but getting cold tomorrow. Hope you are having a good winter. Not very much snow this year which is good for getting around. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:15 PM - A little snow ... and ice cold wind / storm here with me today, dear friend :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose January 11, 2019 at 1:23 PM I like the prospect of flying away on downy wings, May I join your Sunshine, I can use a little heaven too xo Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:13 PM - You are welcome to join, Pixie :) - Many thanks, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 11, 2019 at 12:28 PM HI Sunshine Smile, Your illustration is awesome, I agree with Warren, and your poem is ghostly grey, exactly what you wanted to portray, which you did - an incredible poem - kudos, Poetry hugs, Jennifer. . Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:11 PM - Hi Jennifer :) .... always nice to see you, I greatly appreciate your comment :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll January 11, 2019 at 10:36 AM Anne-Lise you never fail to amaze me. This is brilliant at so many levels and your photograph choice is perfect, Warmest Wishes and a BIG HUG coming your way~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:09 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Warren :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 11, 2019 at 9:20 AM Nicely done, Sunshine.Hugs Eve~`* Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:08 PM - Many thanks Eve, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. January 11, 2019 at 4:10 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I found this write to be dark, mysterious and lovely at the same time. Well done:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:07 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith January 10, 2019 at 2:07 PM Lovely Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2019 at 2:14 PM - Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 10, 2019 at 8:03 AM Soar with the snowflakes, Anne-Lise. Lovely write. Hugs :) Charlie Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2019 at 2:11 PM - Thank you for your lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso January 9, 2019 at 9:34 PM such beautiful and inspiring poetry! Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2019 at 2:11 PM - Thank you for your lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven January 9, 2019 at 7:42 AM Hi Anne-Lise, such a mysterious write. Such a wonderful content. Your words paint strong onto the canvas of my mind. Such a deep write. Your creativity shines with this excellent poetic gem Anne-Lise. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 8:10 AM - Thank you for visiting, lovely comment and the fave, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 9, 2019 at 5:54 AM A dark and wintry write Anne..Nicely written.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:33 AM - Thank you Joseph, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman January 8, 2019 at 4:00 PM Love this profound poetry, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:32 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 7, 2019 at 6:16 PM how mystical; i like this, anne...happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:31 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer January 7, 2019 at 4:20 PM mysterious and very cool, anne-lise! Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:30 AM - Thank you Ilene, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands January 7, 2019 at 3:22 PM Wow, very nicely written Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:30 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One January 7, 2019 at 3:15 PM This is very deep.. Seems like a person touch to this.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:29 AM - Thank you S.O., for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 7, 2019 at 2:14 PM You painted her portrait well...a silent discourse of her mind..well written, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 7:29 AM - Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)