Whisper

Whisper to me when i'm cold and tired
And I have fallen foul of life
Smile for me when I have all but given up

Please talk to me past and present
of something you have yet taste
And let me pause to wonder as evening
Casts his breath

Then if per chance our paths do finally cross
Let it be in spring
In perhaps a distant place where we
Have never been before
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 6:25 PM
wow this seems like it has a strong story to follow it. (:
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 4:59 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brittany. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors what ever they may be. Love, Carol
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April 3, 2011 at 8:37 PM
a very creative and well written piece of poetry.
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