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Whisper

Whisper to me when i'm cold and tired And I have fallen foul of life Smile for me when I have all but given up Please talk to me past and present of something you have yet taste And let me pause to wonder as evening Casts his breath Then if per chance our paths do finally cross Let it be in spring In perhaps a distant place where we Have never been before

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2011 6:25:00 PM
wow this seems like it has a strong story to follow it. (:
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Date: 4/4/2011 4:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brittany. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors what ever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:37:00 PM
a very creative and well written piece of poetry.
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