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me and my friend in a bar, with whiskey as referee! debating the true answer, to chicken and egg theory! with slow slurred speech I said look here my friend,”chicken first, she grew and cockerel wed, then came egg, you know the rest!” he gurgled a laugh and shook, “imagine the work involved, feathers, beak, two eyes to look, egg is easy! problem solved!” Chef was amused at our plight, he said “ one free of that came first!” we quickly agreed I was right, won free piece of chicken breast!!
Honourable mention Written 19/10/2021 Difference in Opinion contest Shreya LN sponsored 7 to 8 syllables each line

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Date: 11/14/2021 7:07:00 PM
Hahaha! Written with your customary ready wit! Congrats on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/14/2022 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Seeker! :)
Date: 10/20/2021 2:34:00 PM
So delightful in your whimsical style Krish! Love the twist at the end. Pubs and whiskey have always generated "spirited" debate. Best wishes for the contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/20/2021 11:41:00 PM
Thanks Sam!! Indeed, a lot of debate is one blind leading the other blind! The conclusions are always to our advantage!!
Date: 10/19/2021 2:52:00 PM
Fun write, enjoyable read, Krish. I think it all depends on whether you are a creationist or an evolutionist. That's just my opinion. Something to think about.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/19/2021 11:23:00 PM
Thanks Milton! All debates are like the debates of the drunken two! No one knows the truth but we talk with confidence! Finally we agree to what suits us!

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