Whiskey Moon Wild Wish

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Written: September 16, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In arrant essence, without a fight, Herald of vamps, in the dead of night Ushers a raw wave that captivates, The heights of the cosmos resonate. Wax in our ears, the truth we long to hear, Despite fear or quaint hopes, with zeal, we steer. In bravery, the sun's light subdues the sight. Rolling through the despair of a lonesome night. Slightly too reckless, we dare to dream, Framing a foist under the whiskey moon gleam. Reminiscing about the warmth once shared, Now mislaid in the miles left behind, scared. Yet in the depths of our soul, a blaze remains. A flicker of optimism that cannot be tamed. Whiskey moon and a reckless wish Guiding us through this journey, a celestial dish. We dance with the cosmos, our spirits alight, Embracing the unsung, chasing the light With every endeavor, we withstand the odds, Leaving behind the solace of familiar nods. In the cosmic realm, we decry our place. Unveiling the secrets with zeal and grace Whiskey moon, shining dazzlingly above Reminding us of castaway love. But in the gloominess, we explore our way, Through the shadows, we will not stray. In the depths of our soul, we hold, The memories of compassion were once bold. Though miles may separate and time may pass, The alliance we formed will always last. Whiskey moon and ambivalent bliss Swaying us through life's unpredictable abyss

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Date: 9/16/2023 11:37:00 AM
True optimism and faith cannot be tamed, when one remains firm and true. I absolutely love this write and depth of your word weaving, the way this flows in such ethereal cadence truly is mind blowing! I love so many lines here especially the way you’ve described the moon as whiskey moon is new. I love that! So good. Through lifes unpredictable abyss your deep and eloquent poetry will always remain as a ray of lunar light, lighting up so many realms. Your way with expressing is beyond impeccable
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Date: 9/16/2023 10:40:00 AM
Master, each of your verse drops a pearl that needs to be pondered on deeply and appreciated with care, so much they are brimming with thoughts, and packed with fine rhythms, rhythm and imagery.
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Date: 9/16/2023 10:11:00 AM
My good friend, this is an exceptional new creation. And I love the words ""whiskey moon"". Superb rhyming and so many very fine verses. I got to fav this gem. God bless you.
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