Whiskers of Time

Whiskers of time brush up
    'gainst gossamer silk web
  Slow down, slow down, they said

  'Til forces impure
    back off their attack
  Faced down, turned-around
                         bone-dry bled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:53 PM
This one is beautiful and ticked me. Your creativity is awesome. The Pangie
Wolf Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Didn't realize you were ticklish, P! Cheers, gw
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:57 AM
This is sad, but beautiful my friend, I love it and it is a fave for me.
Wolf Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Thank you so much for the fave, BJ!
Hawkins Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:30 AM
The frailties of life and life forces. Whiskers of Time. beautifully written. Thank you, Gershon Take care, Old Duck
Wolf Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 7:28 PM
In some ways thought, this one is a bit kwacked!
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