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whirr

whirr of wings above my head loudly roar.... clematis petal moves
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Martin Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Intriguing, I often think butterflies are among the most beautiful garden folk, that and fairies.
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Why, thank you, Ken. The whirr that I heard was the first hummingbird that I heard this year. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 7:17 PM
That's a really nice haiku
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 5:31 AM
Your high praise lifts my spirit, Andrea, thank you. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:00 PM
What a great read with a great picture. Love Both..... Have a great day writing away...........
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Why, thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 5:32 PM
just beautiful words. A pleasure to read, Sara K. Wishing you well, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Sara B. I am delighted it brought you pleasure in reading. It brought me pleasure when the hummingbird was whirring close to my head. Sara K.
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