Whirlwinds

Little dust devils, they twist and shout and spin out of control
                      Dancing across the desert floor, taking dust and dirt into the air
                                         Where they will land, only God knows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 5, 2009 at 8:40 AM
I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Danny. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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October 4, 2009 at 1:38 PM
An amazing description of the "dust devils" that remind me of tumbleweeds I saw on a trip to Arizona. Indeed, only God knows where they will land but their dance across the desert floor is quite a marvel to behold. Outstanding write, Danny! Love, Carolyn
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October 4, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Hi Danny, Ah, I enjoyed this little story of the little dust devils. Thanks for your comment on Wolf Dog and Me. Oh, it's Patty not Paula hun. That's okay I do it all the time, smile....I truly enjoyed this! Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Love Light Truth Patty
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October 4, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Love the reminder of my childhood when we would see whirlwinds. I haven't seen one in years. Of course, it wasn't in the desert that I saw them but on old dirt country roads. Sara
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