Whirlwinds

Little dust devils, they twist and shout and spin out of control Dancing across the desert floor, taking dust and dirt into the air Where they will land, only God knows

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2009 8:40:00 AM

I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Danny. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/4/2009 1:38:00 PM

An amazing description of the "dust devils" that remind me of tumbleweeds I saw on a trip to Arizona. Indeed, only God knows where they will land but their dance across the desert floor is quite a marvel to behold. Outstanding write, Danny! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 8:15:00 AM

Hi Danny, Ah, I enjoyed this little story of the little dust devils. Thanks for your comment on Wolf Dog and Me. Oh, it's Patty not Paula hun. That's okay I do it all the time, smile....I truly enjoyed this! Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Love Light Truth Patty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 3:08:00 AM

Love the reminder of my childhood when we would see whirlwinds. I haven't seen one in years. Of course, it wasn't in the desert that I saw them but on old dirt country roads. Sara