Whirlwind

Romance of the earth, The dust dances with the wind: Elements of love.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/2/2010 2:26:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Raul. Please continue to write and share with us at PoetrySoup the whole year through. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2010 12:22:00 PM

oh, this is so nice, and using natural elements for romance! thanks for your comment on my sonnet. Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/1/2010 9:26:00 PM

Superb Haiku, Raul. Whirlwinds are fascinating to watch-from afar! Peace, Audrey

P Sheart

Date: 1/1/2010 5:47:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Raul! I'll never think of dust in the same way again. Ha! May your pen never run dry! Happy New Year to you and your family!! Love Light Patty

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 1/1/2010 5:11:00 PM

Raul~Very very nicely done! Laura :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2010 3:49:00 PM

Very beautiful write in this Haiku. I can see the whirlwind dancing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/1/2010 2:19:00 PM

very beautiful poem, Hpapy New Year!!