Whirlwind

Romance of the earth,
The dust dances with the wind:
Elements of love.

naturehaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 2, 2010 at 2:26 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Raul. Please continue to write and share with us at PoetrySoup the whole year through. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2010 at 12:22 PM

oh, this is so nice, and using natural elements for romance! thanks for your comment on my sonnet. Andrea

Audrey Haick

January 1, 2010 at 9:26 PM

Superb Haiku, Raul. Whirlwinds are fascinating to watch-from afar! Peace, Audrey

P Sheart

January 1, 2010 at 5:47 PM

Beautiful Haiku Raul! I'll never think of dust in the same way again. Ha! May your pen never run dry! Happy New Year to you and your family!! Love Light Patty