Whirlpools of the Mind

WHIRLPOOLS OF THE MIND
Cycles of life..churn..revolve,dissolve..
resurface..mix in restless sleep.
Deep from the chasms of the
unconscious, the froths of 
yesterday's concerns as flotsam
become a jetsam dream..to
scatter up on the beach of
our tomorrow..as hazy recollections.
Forlorn..half-remembered..such 
detritus of our persona slowly erodes
shrinking in the light of day.
Put into proportion such giants become
dwarf like..distant litter on our
horizon..to fade away forever upon 
the tide of each new dawn's..reality.

You may hear me recite this and most of my PS endeavours on youtube under my pen name ichthyschiro
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Strand Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Thank you James for your kind words.regards Brian
Goff Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 8:02 AM
perfect reality, Brian, enjoyed immensely! jimbo
Richards Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:51 PM
I must go listen to you recite this beauty !!
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