Eve Roper Poet Haiku

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Whirlpool Glass Art Haiku

Whirlpool 
         



opposing current  
tides swirling downdraft vortex
blown canvas of glass

5/30/2016

# 9  Glass Art 

8/28/2014, first poem submitted in poetry soup

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Sneha Rv June 8, 2016 at 3:19 PM How wonderful!! This is so lovely.. :) :)

Richard Lamoureux June 7, 2016 at 12:44 AM I think you captured the essence of the photo Eve. Well done!

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2016 at 1:17 PM love the swooshing, gliding effect, eve...a winner for me..huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis June 6, 2016 at 7:43 AM Crystalized wording gives birth to the picture! Fantastic dear, Eve! A seven!

Sara Kendrick June 6, 2016 at 5:42 AM Enjoyed reading this one...Describes the picture very well..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

Arthur Vaso June 4, 2016 at 11:29 PM The artist speaks! Loved this! I haven't been around as much, hope you and hubby are doing ok!

David Brooks June 4, 2016 at 2:17 PM Very good. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2016 at 11:10 AM Excellent one..Reads like a winner in this contest..Way to go..Sara

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2016 at 9:04 PM VERY nice, Eve!!! I hear hubbie in the driveway. Dang and I had only two comments to go!!

Balveen Cheema June 1, 2016 at 12:58 PM Beautifully done, Eve!

Ravi Sathasivam June 1, 2016 at 6:57 AM Beautiful interpretation of the image. Powerful haiku. Thanks for sharing it.

Casarah Nance May 31, 2016 at 8:40 AM very nice

Sandra Haight May 31, 2016 at 6:52 AM Love your interpretation here, Eve. A powerful Haiku that paints that image. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A May 31, 2016 at 2:13 AM lovely this is Eve, enjoyed and good luck in the contest:)... ~Linda~

Karam Misra May 31, 2016 at 1:41 AM Nice one, Eve. All the best for the contest. ~karam~

Walter T. Ashe May 30, 2016 at 9:03 PM This Haiku and that picture are a "canvas" in and of itself! The best to you in this contest!

Probir Gupta May 30, 2016 at 8:08 PM .....And that is our life. Lovely haiku Eve conforming to the glass art....probir

Probir Gupta May 30, 2016 at 8:06 PM .....And that is our life. Lovely haiku Eve conforming to the glass art....probir

Jan Allison May 30, 2016 at 8:01 PM lovely interpretation of the image Eve - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx