Whipping Wind

Torrential downpour Wind whipping inside and out Destruction rampant
Russell Sivey Entrant into SandyIvy Davis's "Hurricanes -Only Haiku" contest 11/6/2012
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November 10, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Russell, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed stopping by to read all the hurricane haiku... every winner on this list had a mind blowing image... take care~ Always* PD
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November 9, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Russell. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2012 at 1:41 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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November 9, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Congratulations on you well deserved win Russell xx
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November 8, 2012 at 11:59 PM
CONGRATS RUSSELL LUV ON A GRAND WIN FOR A GREAT WRITE ON HURRICANE FORCE AND FURY .. SUPERB TITLE COMPLIMENTS YOUR FABULOUS CREATIVE POETRY .. CONGRATS ON ALL OTHER WINS AS WELL WHICH I STILL CANNOT COMMENT ON .. SORRY MY FRIEND .. I AM MISSING MUCH NOT BEING ABLE TO VIEW YOUR BRILLIANT WORDS ..
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:50 PM
and I see this one has won in SandyIvy's contest. way to go, Russell.
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November 8, 2012 at 8:00 PM
thank you' san
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November 7, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Winner for sure..Great job for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Well we can't win them all or even place in them all..The thing is I wrote one or two or three...Sara
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November 7, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Russell, you hit home with this one. Absolutely love, love, love it!! Hope your week is great one my friend!
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November 6, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Hi Russell, the image of this haiku, is ravaging. Almost like mixing cake mix, without natures destruction.. Thank you for sharing, I truly enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"
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