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Whine, Wine, W(H)ine

Whine, wine, W(h)ine
All the time.
Like a spoiled brat,
You need to be slapped.

Is your confidence that bad?
you are always a nag-
Perpetually in my face,
don't you know it's total disgrace?

"Lookee me, I'm so bright!"
Man, it just ain't right!
Attention seeking freak,
you are plainly weak.

Step down from your throne
or you may just get overblown!
Pull that cob out of your ****,
You are nothing but a farce!

If you only knew how you are truly viewed,
Your false ego would be screwed.
If you had any kind of skill-
You wouldn't be going for exhaustive overkill.

A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 19, 2010 at 9:07 PM
Ah, my source is an inspiration here in the real world, someone you folks would never know.
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May 19, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Great poem for telling somebody off, Amy. I found parts of it quite hilarious! So are you gonna give away your "inspiration"? haha. LUv, andrea
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May 19, 2010 at 2:06 PM
WOW! Quite an emotional venting out poem, Amy! You have someone in mind? :) Again, the poem is well written and rhymed. Best wishes, Caroline.
Taylor Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Awesome, Amy. I hope I never get on your bad side! Somebody sure has been told in no uncertain terms. Great job. All the best, Ralph.
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May 19, 2010 at 12:47 AM
oh youchy! I sure wouldn't want to be in the receiving end of this poem! You wrote this really well, the emotion is just out there to grab you! Great work, Amy :) & thanks for the tips on the Anne Rice books :) will be keeping my eyes peeled now :)
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May 18, 2010 at 10:53 PM
I enjoyed reading you this morning dearest Amy.......... Great poem Charma
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