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Whimsey Vs Angst

~~~~Whimsey vs. Angst ( or- You Don't Have to Be Drunk But it Helps)~~~~ Words of whimsey from my pen flow, while words of angst I bury below. Which is me, you may never know if it's only pieces I care to show. Whimsey is as whimsey does. So frivilous, happy thoughts buzz around in my brain , as if it was full of nothing but fluff and fuzz. Writing of angst is not my thing. Words of sadness, words that sting. Whimsical words always bring a happier mood, a fest, a fling. So don't ask me for a sad, sad song. It would definitely be wrong to bore you with an epitome long that saddens and depresses the throng. Poetry of a happier time flows in verses and in rhyme. I'll pen you thoughts joyful and sublime if you just pass the tequila and the lime.

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Date: 3/6/2013 6:10:00 PM
hat a priceless verse Francine, it bubbles with fun and common sense; definitely gives me a lift especially sipping that last line. Tim left a note to check your remark on his blog and I was so touched by those sweet words of yours. Thank you Francine, praise comes from the most amazing places and all I can humbly say is thank you. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 2/27/2013 3:13:00 PM
a wonderfully writen poem!
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Date: 2/18/2013 6:46:00 PM
I like a bit of salt on mine!!!! Love this light-hearted whimsical poem....it brightens my evening! Hic....oops, excuse please...one too many margaritas!! LOL !!
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Date: 2/6/2013 10:24:00 AM
Love this Francine every last line it wonderful xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 11:46:00 AM
BAM!!! YOU JUST KNOCKED MY SOCKS OFF! THIS IS THE WINNER! THE ONE I CHOOSE AS THE BEST. THE BEST I'VE SEEN IN A LONG TIME.YOU DID THE WORK AND I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THIS IS A MASTERPIECE. IT IS GOING TO MY FAVS.AND HERE IS MY STAMP OF HIGHEST APPROVAL. JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:52:00 PM
oh my, that last part really brought the humor out in this one, dear. I really like this. It almost looks like it could be for that one contest on chasing away the blues. Is it?
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Date: 2/4/2013 7:14:00 AM
Francine I loved this so much. A bright lifting rhyme one that brought a smile to my face. Great write. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:16:00 AM
I love your clever ending to the shades of a poet's pen Francine. Thank you also for my placement in your 'Winter be gone contest'. You had a lot of fine entries to choose from and l feel honored to be included in your winning list. Mahalo Nui Loa
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:49:00 AM
Hahaha! I'm on my way to join you, Francine! I Like this a lot! Enjoy your afternoon! Love, Annalise
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