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While You'Re There

When you arrive
All those there should strive to make you smile
And be ready to sacrifice their chair
In the hopes that you'll sit and stay a while
And see you happy every moment that you're there

While you're there
A drunk poet sits there unprepared
To express the beauty of a lady fair
But being the kind person that she is
She gives him ample time to declare

When you leave
All of those there who care about you know you're gone
And they pray your absence doesn't last too long
And they wonder at the moment you'll return
For your happiness and presence do they yearn

When you're gone
I think of you and erect a fantasy
Of you sitting there next to me
And amidst the laughter, a moment when our eyes meet
And we lean in and share a kiss so sweet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/16/2016 1:41:00 PM
Genius you've somehow worked in "erect" here without being too lewd.
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:46:00 AM
I like this #clever
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:58:00 AM
Brett, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2016 7:56:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brett.
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Date: 4/25/2016 10:49:00 PM
Brett,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/25/2016 11:59:00 PM
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