While You Were Napping

i look at you; i see a lot of light in you
i see a lot of hope in the eyes of you
i look at you; i see a lot of sun in you
i see a lot of free in the thoughts of you
i look at you; i feel you as a flame.
then,
i feel you burst into a fountain

when i see you i know i really see you
and all the bright bright beauty inside you
i see a lot of life inside of you
and i see all that life becoming true

when i see you i know i really see you
and all that delightful life pours from you
i feel a lot of life from you
and i see all of that life is true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 7, 2010 at 6:19 PM
oooh my little baby. i love you. and everything you write.
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