WHILE THE STARS WERE SLEEPING

The sky was a blanket of clouds this morning…no birds were singing…no rabbits leaping.
I imagine underneath that blanket…a million stars were sleeping.

I miss the stars when they’re asleep…when our morning walk we cannot share…
but I do take some solace and find some comfort in knowing they’re still there.

So…while the stars were sleeping and I was walking on my own…
I decided, on a whim, to flip through the pictures on my phone.

Like most people, I imagine, my phone is filled to capacity
with pictures from my life…photos of places, friends and family.

And I thought…how wonderful…how exciting…my phone is a memoir…
filled, as I flipped through photos…with a myriad of stars.

Shooting stars…flashing for a moment…as shooting stars are prone…
but a moment I feel blessed…to have captured on my phone.

And in my heart and in my mind…a new thought was given birth:
How lucky I am to be surrounded by so many stars on Earth.

Stars right here on my phone…that I forever shall be keeping…
an awareness made on a cloudy night…
while all the other stars were sleeping.

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Date: 12/23/2023 8:15:00 AM
This is so heartfelt and for some reason reminds me of how i also used to feel when my son was a toddler and when he sleeps, and when i get some alone time.. i still miss him but still find comfort in knowin he is there. Stars i feel can be interpreted also as loved ones… and i love how you’ve said “ shooting stars” etc sometimes yes we go through pictures on our phone and reminisce, sense of nostalgia flowing through your lines: pleasure reading this. Hope holidays treat you well
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