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While I'M Down

Most people rely on others for love and support But I'm here.... alone, afraid, and nervous... I'm unsure of my next move, Because everything I touch disintegrates... Where are you ??? Where are we??? Better yet, Where am I??? This search for my consciousness is relentless, as I remain in this unfathomable state of mind… With everything pitch black, with no light, no one, and no sound, How can I work my way up? When you constantly kick a man while he's down...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 7:44:00 PM

Hi Jason, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:31:00 AM

Maybe you don't have to work yourself up, just breath and enjoy the quietness. Then start all over. Just saying. SKAT

Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:28:00 AM

That's a deep twist, Jason, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT