While I Dreamt

Long hair, coal, coiled
‘Round fingertips, bone white.

O, my diffident lover,
How I waited for that night.

When I held you as you dreamt,
And kissed your quivering lips.

When we bathed in the uncloaked moonlight,
In an everlasting eclipse.

Sky, the blankest façade
Lit by nicks of white.  

I carry you into my dream;
I carry you into the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 12:13 AM
Sweet kiss to this lovely written poem Jessica. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise
Vh Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 7:50 AM
=) Thanks!
Rhinem Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 10:29 PM
Smile ˜ Very lovely poe ˜ After viewing its moment I was reflecting upon these quivering lips that your beauty mentioned and thinking back unto my ex and how that in her love and meekness her lips used to sometimes quiver ˜ Makes ones heart melt with the beauty found amid such ˜ Not many things more beautiful than a precious heart ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
Vh Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Thanks for reading!
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