While He Was Asleep She Left-

~I was asleep I awoke lying here in my bed I looked out the window can I see that it's raining I see the rain falling down where is the sun I see the clouds rolling moving moving moving on I roll over and I see darling I see the rain outside where has my woman in gone

Is a note on her pillow it says that I've treated treated you wrong by the time I finish this letter you been long gone gone gone feel my tears falling down my cheek women what have you done oh girl I am so sorry sorry sorry for those wrongs the stupid things I've done but you can't hear me now now that you're gone

I was asleep now I'm awoke lying here in my bed I looked I looked out the window and I see that it's raining and see the tears falling down in the mirror where is my face where is the sun I see the clouds rolling moving moving moving on darling you're gone I see the rain outside Lord where is the sun? ??




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Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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August 22, 2020 at 3:23 PM
James, This is a true to life poem. You put it together so well, only to see it left out in the rain. -Richard
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