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While Earth Erodes

Cry to the sky while Earth erodes beneath your feet
Doing anything to strengthen against certain defeat
Start from the beginning of something once finished
Never let things brightest to you become diminished 
You might not know the cost of what could have been
Blindness may also be that which remains to be seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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The Gypsy King Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Yes
Cooke Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:31 AM
i like this love the last line, good poetry well written
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