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which way to read it? you choose

Your existence is worthless
never believe
there's hope for you
gaze into a mirror
you are nothing
cease telling yourself
you are somebody in this world
no one deserves you
don't let anyone tell you
you are beautiful
now read it backwards :)

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Date: 2/10/2025 4:01:00 PM
Hello Peonieslore, I read this poem from the bottom upwards. It will be my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/I am mourning the death of my cat. I thought I would let you know. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 9/27/2024 7:38:00 AM
Very clever and beautifully thought out. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/25/2024 12:36:00 PM
These reverse kind of poems are so neat. A guy named Mike Bayles sometimes writes this way here at Soup. Much better read upward!
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Date: 9/24/2024 9:55:00 AM
Wow that is incredible. The definition of poetry is best words in their best order. You have turned this rule upside down. Kudos. SuZ
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Date: 7/2/2024 10:55:00 AM
Wow! This one is quite ingenious! Love it! A fave!
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Date: 6/21/2024 2:37:00 PM
This is rather Ingenius- never would have thought it very encouraging words, welcome to PS!
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Date: 6/21/2024 4:56:00 AM
Does th is mean that I should read words back to you? Great idea.
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Date: 6/20/2024 3:20:00 PM
Ooh love it. Light vs. dark. Nice work mi
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Date: 6/20/2024 3:23:00 PM
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Date: 6/20/2024 3:04:00 PM
Hello MiMi, So nice to meet you. I like the way you created this poem. it must have been hard to do. It will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/ Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2024 10:32:00 AM
Hello i Mi, I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Keep on creating poetry. Your welcome Thank you I had a lovely evening. i hope you did to. xx Darlene.

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