Which

Which 

The love which spread across
The care which falls around 
The respect which bows for you 
The humbleness which you feel inside
The kindness which clears your mind
The softness which comes for you 
The attention which is just for you 
The rain which spread pearls 
The shine which comes through the sun 
The yellow which bright your day
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Dalei Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Drishti, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
Arora Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 3:28 AM
Thanks ??
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August 14, 2016 at 12:14 AM
Drishti , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Arora Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Thanks ..i'll be eager to talk with u
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August 13, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Drishti Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Arora Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Thanks for telling
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